The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
Felt like a lovely trip down memory lane. I liked seeing summer through this POV, it makes it more real and more fun than today's hyper-speed rush through everything while overloaded with technology. A great reminder of what those kind of carefree days were like.
Oh, this is just the way I remember it. You have stirred great memories of the good old days.
07/31/09
Every stanza brought back memories of my small town in Iowa. A lot of thought (and heart) went into this! A joy and a delight to read. Very nice. :)