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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Summer (the season) (07/09/09)

TITLE: Those Were the Days!
By Jeanne E Webster
07/14/09


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“Summertime...and the livin’ is easy. Fish are jumpin’ and the cotton is high.”

I’ve always liked that song, mainly for taking me back to memorable family summer vacations spent at my grandparent's home in Massachusetts. Those lazy, hazy days of summer were the happiest times of my childhood. Small town life in the mid-1940s was kid safe; one could play outside unsupervised from sunup to sundown with no problems. We’d stuff a peanut butter sandwich in our pocket after breakfast, and off we’d scamper on our all-day carefree adventures.

Our youthful bantam legs struggled as they carried us up that steep knoll to the top of Walnut Hill, then braked as down, down, down we coasted to the placid waters of Lake Mattawa. Dawdling around the lake edges for a while, we’d skim stones across the water, search for baby fish, and wade into the warm clear waters to extract pretty rocks or other treasures not too far out into the lake.

After resting from our arduous one mile trek, we’d wander through the adjacent pine trees and head for Uncle Brad’s house. We had an unwritten privilege of fishing rights to his pond, and after we had dug up some worms and crawlers, we’d grab some of his many fishing poles and scamper down to the stagnant, bubble-gurgling pond. We were delighted to snaggle luminous bluegills and sunfish, and catfish and brilliant yellow pike were always in bountiful supply. Tiring from catching such “huge” fish, we’d retreat to Aunt Winnie’s back porch and eat our sandwiches and partake of her home-made lemonade especially set out for our disposal. It was our habit to linger a while after our repast and visit the hen houses, barnyard and outbuildings. What merriment was had while playing in the granary, jumping on top of the loose corn and smelling the aromas of earth’s harvest offerings!

Next we’d ramble on south a couple of miles towards Aunt Judy’s house and spend the rest of the day interacting with her eleven kids. We’d play hide-and-seek, cowboys and Indians, cops and robbers, and with adult supervision, we could play croquet. We had no store-bought toys; we merely used our imaginations, which in all reality, was pure delight... pretty much. Once one of my cousins dared me to pick some poison ivy and rub it on my arms and legs. So I double-dared him to do it too. Well...the next day he had poison ivy all over his body, and I had nary a blister. To this day I’m not allergic to the ivy!

Aunt Judy filled our tummies with her family’s supper fixings before we headed back to Gramp and Gram’s home. Sometimes, if the sun was still halfway up the western sky, we’d stop off at the churchyard and wander out back to the cemetery to pick the delicious wild strawberries there. They were so tiny but, oh, so succulent!

Summertime...heaven-sent days for earth-bound children, quickly spent and forever gone. Before I knew it, I was back in the classroom staring out of the window, harking back to my adventurous, happy-go-lucky days and anticipating next summer’s escapades. Oh, to be a kid again!?


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Seema Bagai 07/16/09
Sounds like yours was an enjoyable childhood filled with adventure and precious memories. Great writing.
Jim McWhinnie 07/21/09
Absolutely enjoyable. Yes, those were the days.

You have such a relaxed and comfortable style, a wonderful gift.

And as far as good sentences ... they don't cam any better than ... 'Summertime...heaven-sent days for earth-bound children, quickly spent and forever gone. '
Jan Ackerson 08/20/09
Jeanne, I'm going to feature this entry in the Front Page Showcase for the week of September 20. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page...and congratulations!
Ada Nett09/24/09
Reading this creates a longing to go back there, where hearts were young and carefree...
well-written...congrats on making the home page!

~Cathy~
Pam Ford Davis 09/24/09
Maybe the song titled "Where have all the flowers gone" should have a follow up tune:
"Where have all the summers gone!"
Charla Diehl 09/24/09
First--congratulations on being featured this week--that's how I came to read this delightful story of simpler times. Kids today are glued to computers, playing video games and not even aware on what they're missing--so sad for them. Thanks for the memories this story evoked in me.