The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
Cute poem--think I need to get some bug spray now.
07/18/09
What a fun bit of writing and reading! I would say this was a tour de force of sparkling whimsy.

It's a chuckler.
07/20/09
Excellent use of alliteration! The poem had movement and pace. I loved the bees' verse best.
07/20/09
Gorgeous~Gorgeous~Gorgeous

What a pulse and pace! Whew! Loved it. Thanks so much for sharing.
07/23/09
I can totally hear this set to fun music! Awesome poem. Congratulations!!!
07/23/09
I tend to think of "summer's scintillating swarms" as natural enemies, but you found the beauty in them. So many lovely lines... I'll definitely have to re-read this! Congratulations!!
07/23/09
Delightful—loved all those wonderful descriptive words.