The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/09
Your detailed descriptions drew me in to the scene. Very homely and welcoming.
07/17/09
Your writing grabbed my imagination so I could be right there with Sugar enjoying the presence of Ruth.
07/17/09
Absolutely wonderful story! Two favorites - your description of Ruth and Sugar's bringing in "Raymond" the turtle. Loved it all. Laura
07/17/09
A sweet story. Makes me want to go out and get some ice cream.
07/18/09
This delightful moment was told with a screenwriter's eye. Scene and dialog were quite outstanding.

This would make a wonderful scene in a more fully developed play.
07/20/09
I think that Ruth and I must be related! I like ice cream too. I enjoyed the descrption of the Ruth very much, not your air-brushed beauty, but big-hearted and generous.