The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
If this isn't a sample from a full book, it should be.
07/17/09
This certainly has the ring of an exciting story, especially the description of flight. I must admit was somewhat confused as to when it was set, since Dathen says he was the first man to fly, yet he has pneumatic tubes firing tranqulizer darts with which to shoot down donkeys.