The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
Well written. You had me on the edge of my seat. Nice work.
07/16/09
Interesting glimpse into another culture. Well-written with good pacing.
07/16/09
I wasn't quite sure what the danger was and would have appreciated a little more lead in but the ending was well worth the read!
07/16/09
What a wonderful and well written story. Thank you for sharing it.
07/17/09
An interesting insight into a different culture's take on the summer solstice. It would have been helpful to know if this story was set within a specific time period.
07/20/09
An interesting and believable portrayal of a cultural ritual (rooted, of course, in an ancient pagan past). I was expecting a tragic conclusion, so I was pleasantly surprised by the miracle!
07/20/09
A different kind of entry but a very good one. I love other cultures being brought into the mix and you did exceedingly well in presenting it. Big time kudos!