The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/09
This is an interesting story but I think you missed the mark on the topic, unless, of course, I missed something. It is after midnight when I'm reading:)
07/14/09
Thank you for gently confronting us with the tragic reality that children can also experience twilight years.
I see a creative twist on the topic; this child was indeed in his twilight years, knowing his death was just around the corner. The reality of this story brings to the surface how many are living without hope.
07/16/09
This is so sad, more so knowing that it is a reality. Good Job.
07/16/09
Congratulations, Gregory!

Great writing!
07/17/09
Beautiful, evocative writing that had me close to tears - a subject very dear to my heart. Thank you and congratulations.
07/24/09
Gripping and fast-paced yet so thoughtful. And tragic... Thank you for this, it touched me.