The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed very much this sweet family story and liked the lesson presented.
07/11/09
Liked the message tucked into this tender story of a generational family.
07/13/09
Very believable characters - enjoyed reading this!
07/13/09
Such a realistic account of a very meaningful family moment. I so enjoyed the story but even more how it was written.
07/13/09
A very charming and heartwarming story with a great message, too. Very well written. I enjoyed this.
07/14/09
Love covers a multitude of sins - and graciously gives thanks for any extra (and unexpected) protein in applesauce. A beautiful snapshot.
What a tender story, a peek inside a family. You connected on several good points with this entry. Kudos!
Yummy, boiled worms. LOL Seriously, a terrific story and good lesson. Love it.
07/15/09
Not sure I want to try that apple sauce. :) Wonderful lesson tucked into this family story. Thank you!
07/15/09
LOL--I hope so too about those wormy apples! Though I am not a fan of applesauce, I enjoyed reading about the creation process. you made it interesting! Great teen story. ^_^
I hope so too. Can't imagine eatin' applesauce w/ cooked worms. eeeewwww. Great story!
Great story and wonderfully written. Well done!