The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
I love your David character!
What a delightful story! And love the humor.
07/09/09
Delightful character study. Well done.
This was excellent - such a fun read. You showed me something fun could be done with the topic!
07/13/09
What an absolute delight to read this entry of yours! I found myself laughing out loud, which is a good thing! Very clever - very clever. If I wore a hat, it would be off to your writing! Laura
07/13/09
What a charming, fun story! I really enjoyed this!
Oh, my, this is a great one!
07/13/09
I enjoyed reading your amusing story. I think we always stay young inside - though our bodies wear out. Nice to read a good story. Thanks
07/14/09
Great details! A very good read and sweet message of enduring love. Good job.
07/14/09
I enjoyed the read. It's certanily a good way to keep a marriage by always staying as honeymooners.
07/15/09
I was drawn in by the title, the hope and humour hinted at. And man, was I ever satisified! Awesome work - the characters just shine through, especially Dave. You said soooo much just with their actions, expressions and thoughts. Love the line about pinning down his memory - priceless. The playful, vibrant attitude of the couple is inspiring as well as giggle-worthy. Nice, nice job.
Delightful mc and wonderful message. I love the humor, too.