The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed reading this. The gradual warming of the mc, along with her wisdom and sense of humor, were very well done.
The story idea is great. I loved the old lady's wit. A little editing/touch-up might help. (my opinion only). The ending was terrific, but sad to read. A nice entry.
07/13/09
This is a very fun character. I liked her:)