The Official Writing Challenge
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The details in this story make it worth a second and third read, an exquisite character piece.
07/10/09
I fell in love with your Miss Stuart! Such a lovely soul. If I could, I'd join her for a cup of tea. Just a beautiful story. Intimate.
Mona
07/10/09
Miss Stuart: an example for us all. Very good.
Great details in your descriptions. Lovely, well-written, and on topic.
07/11/09
Clever, entirely authentic ending. Some great description - I particularly liked, "waving in the cross-breezes like mermaid hair swept by underwater currents"
07/11/09
Your beautiful and creative words took me into the scene of your story and held me there until the end. Wonderfully crafted with an inspiring message for anyone of any age. Two thumbs up to you.
You created a beautiful picture of a woman of faith and hopeful expectation. Very nice.
07/14/09
A lovely character study with such delicately detailed descriptions.
07/16/09
A beautiful portrait of a wonderful character. Congratulations--very well done!!
07/16/09
Gorgeous first sentence.
Lovely descriptions and voice throughout.

Perfect ending.

Well done, Beth! Always a
pleasure to read your
writing.
07/17/09
You painted a lovely picture here, and the comments about accepting losses were well placed without being over done. Congratulations on your win!