The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your poem very much. It reminded me of a song my grandmother used to sing....... I just steal away and pray! Beautiful!
The "sing song" cadence adds to the comforting message of your poem. It read sort of like a lullabye to me!
08/10/05
Lovely, lovely.
08/13/05
Poetry has to be perfect... like fine lace, every thread in place. Very nice submission, very good work. Thank you!
08/14/05
My favourite lines are about wishing we could stay but having to return to our tasks, yet knowing that we can return to retreat later. Beautiful work. Well done.
08/14/05
A nice poem :)