The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute poem.

It would be a wonderful contribution to publication catering to girls.

The rhyme and rhythm were so tight that when on the few occasions it was just a shade off, it was a bit jarring ... i.e. the last verse ...
Loved the spunky jump to this rhyme and especially the analogy of the jumper to the human condition of aging. Nice work!