The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this!! Good job!
This is so funny,yet so true. I love it! Great job.
Loved the glint in Jesus' eye! Great job!
Nice way to weave humor and truth! You had me chuckling several times - loved the weeping woman plunging into the buxom woman's chest. ;-D
Enjoyable read!
This was so funny! Sounds exactly like me. Good job!
LOL - too funny! My favorite line was, "Maria gave her one of her buxomly hugs, and held her head…in there…for quite some time." Ha! Great story. Loved it!
Blessings, Lynda
That ol' glint in the eye...I see that quite often! Cute story. :)
I enjoyed the word picture of the silly moms running home to check on their husbands. Very readable and something we all relate to.
I literally laughed out loud at the little bulletin insert! Very nice, self-deprecating wit. Well done.
So many truths tucked into a treasure chest of humor! (chest? No pun intended! Haha!)
Well written- a good reminder about the best laid plans....
I knew exactly where and when you were ... oh ... wrong country ... hmm ... have you been doing any internation travel recently?
Ok, my favorite part -......and held her head…in there..... (so typical!) :) This is probably more true than fiction but what a fun read! Thanks!
great story... smoothly written. I suspect that God could make use of even a disaster such as that one for a greater good! Thanks!
ha ha- this is the day that the Lord has made- let us rejoice and be glad in it! very nicely detailed!
Totally enjoyed this! An excellent read. Too much fun and a whole lot of truth mixed in!
Loved the creativity of your character. Glad she got a wake up call. Well written, funny/sad read.