The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Frisky fellow, wasn't he?

As an old codger nearing those days, thanks for the shot of vigor.

Well done.
07/13/09
Gotta love your MC's spunk! And his faith and words of wisdome even more. A nice piece of writing here.
07/13/09
I like Mr. Larson! He's the coolest!
07/13/09
Very cute story, Josh. The line about crossing the line with the enema made me snarf...I thought, "amen." Great job!
07/13/09
This is charming. I love your MC!
07/13/09
I love your mc and his sense of humor. That part about switching teeth-a riot!
07/14/09
Nice touch, Josh! Very interesting read with mild humor and vivid characterization.
07/16/09
Loved your story, Josh! As always, a great laugh...I can't wait to meet the FUNNY, FUNNY man behind the story...only a few more weeks!!!!
07/17/09
Nice job! I wondered if this was your entry....the title is typical Josh style. :) 750 words is not enough to cram in all that we want to say, eh? I liked your conclusion, though - the last line is perfect.
07/17/09
What an outrageous character - at one level crude and sexist, on the other taking a forceful line on monogamy. An amazing contrast laced throughout with humour. Wow.