The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Beautiful images and many exquisite word choices.

Be careful not to "overwrite". You are so filled with gorgeous words that it is tempted to use them all. Give those beautiful gems so breathing room.

You are truly an artist with words. Absolutely beautiful.
07/11/09
I love this, and it makes the twilight years something to anticipate.
07/12/09
I don't know if I can tell you just how wonderful this piece is. All emotions touched upon by a gentle stroke of the pen. This is writing.
Mona