The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the Wentworths. I just hope I won't be like either of them! It made me sad that the wife didn't really have a clue.
07/10/09
I remember my nerves were a little on the shattered side when my father began to drive on the wrong side of the road! Glad he gave it up on his own. Great way of presenting a sad truth.
I just had such a wonderful laugh! What a wonderful cure for my nerves. :-) Your humor was spot on!
This is so true, but so sad. Can there be such a thing as sad humor? Right on topic and well-written.
07/11/09
Your excellent ending took me completely by surprise. I loved the characterisation of Mrs W.
07/11/09
Right on topic with this sad and familiar aspect of aging.
Mrs. Wentworth made me smile as I pictured this scene unfolding.
07/14/09
What a treasure box of stories you must have!

This was priceless, especially the sweet way the couple spoke to/about one another. This kind of a twilight--to lose one's memory--is a bit sad, but your story paid a lovely tribute to this couple whose fine qualities still remained.

Thanks for writing.