The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/09
Charming, charming. You put a smile on this old face of mine.
07/10/09
The first stanza last 2 lines need a little reworking. The rest has all been said before in other rhymes. Just a little was fresh. Rhymning was good though. Keep writing.
07/15/09
I enjoyed this short poem in spite of its not-so-original content. Your rhythm was a bit off in places, but I'm no expert. Keep writing.