The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/09
I must be naive because you got me on this one. I didn't see it coming. Kudos to ya for a job well done! Loved it!
06/13/09
Ahhh, a sweet little story with a happy ending. Yay! Nice job!
06/14/09
Well this sure went where I wasn't expecting! Nicely written.
Oh boy, you caught me off guard. I had to laugh when their relationship was revealed.
What a storyteller! The minute details draws the reader into the plot making you feel you know the characters by story's end. Love the surprise ending, too.