The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
Oh, I really like this. Love how you incorporated the topic so masterfully in each stanza. Great messages throughout.
I love your poem. It clearly rings from your heart. And the last verse is really beautiful.
Congratulations on placing with your beautiful prayer-poem.
06/18/09
a powerful prayer--congratulations on your EC placing--well deserved!
Super poem and congrats on your placement!
06/18/09
Very effective use of the topic words here! Congratulations!!
06/18/09
This is empty and full to the max! Wonderful! Congratulations on placing in the top ten this week!
06/19/09
This is so wonderful, I can so identify with every verse. Brilliant poetry.
07/01/09
So much said in so few words--this spoke to me as a devotional poem today--thank you for the wisdom packed in each line. Congratulations on your win.
07/14/09
This is absolutely stunning, Patricia. You are richly blessed with a talent the Lord will use many times over. Blessings, Laura