The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
I enjoyed your story of joy (despite your MC's circumstances). Your title is perfect for your story.
06/15/09
Hmmm, pretty good, but it seems like too much story and details, there's not enough words to really explore all the possibilities of this story. The title fits though and I like how it matched being in FL.
06/15/09
What a sweet story! I agree, the title fits the story perfectly. Thanks for sharing. It's one of those stories where you wonder if it isn't true.
06/15/09
Great story of getting older, withstanding change and being very needed at an appropriate time for all involved. Keep writing!
06/17/09
Very tenderly written. I'm glad you entered it in the challenge.
06/17/09
Sunshine and Sonshine exhibited in this one. Spoke to those of us who seek to make a difference and feel needed despite our age/situation.
Mona