The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
I enjoyed your story of joy (despite your MC's circumstances). Your title is perfect for your story.
06/15/09
Hmmm, pretty good, but it seems like too much story and details, there's not enough words to really explore all the possibilities of this story. The title fits though and I like how it matched being in FL.
06/15/09
What a sweet story! I agree, the title fits the story perfectly. Thanks for sharing. It's one of those stories where you wonder if it isn't true.
06/15/09
Great story of getting older, withstanding change and being very needed at an appropriate time for all involved. Keep writing!
Very tenderly written. I'm glad you entered it in the challenge.
06/17/09
Sunshine and Sonshine exhibited in this one. Spoke to those of us who seek to make a difference and feel needed despite our age/situation.
Mona