The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/09
Some very powerful imagery here.
06/14/09
Ooooh - beautiful imagery and what a powerful piece.
06/15/09
A beautiful, intense depiction of hopelessness transformed into hope. Your imagery is very evocative!
I believe I know for whom this was written, Pat. It's painfully descriptive yet tenderly applied. I know it must have been both difficult to write and yet comforting. Your big ole heart just opened up and gave us another glimpse inside. A lovely piece.
In your beautiful poem, I see healing for your loved one and comfort for you. Very well done.
06/15/09
Beautiful! I think it DID work to break the rules...the way you wrote it fit the subject matter so well.
06/15/09
Wow, I thought this was lovely...well done!
A beautiful look at hope in what many say is hopeless. Nicely done.
06/18/09
Very, very nice. Emotional, triumphant, gripping. Well done, congrats on your placement!
06/23/09
I'm a bit late in reading the entries, but glad this was chosen as a stand out entry. In just a few words you said so much--A beautiful piece. Congratulations!
02/28/10
Pat, I'm going to feature this beautiful poem in the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 8. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!