The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
I was transported to this time and place in your story. Heartbreak and hope coincide there. This sounds like a true story.
06/17/09
Great job and I liked the first line, it made me want to see the story through and I'm glad I did. I love the heart inside of it and the ending leaves a note of hope for many more good things to come. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.
06/17/09
Wow. Real details. Sounds like it was written fron firsthand knowledge. Very good.
Mona