The Official Writing Challenge
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Your descriptions are wonderful, "the marks of a million souls wiped, swept and picked up. A world in constant motion, swirling around the measured, quiet man. Your ending was most welcome!
A lovely study of loneliness and pride. And an exquisite hint of reconciliation.
I loved your story--very touching. Your details leave a clear description of your characters. Well written!
I loved your story with the wonderful character study and the happy ending.Congratulations on placing.
Beautiful story wonderfully told.
Super story...well written...and congrats on the win!
Oh, that last line gave me goosebumps! Congratulations--well done!
I was swept into this man's world. Magical use of words and phrases, a soothing voice, and a joyous ending. Just lovely work. Many congrats - you deserve an EC for sure!
A wonderfully tender piece with a hearwarming ending. Great job! Congratulations Diana. Loved this!
Your words created all the needed pictures to make this story come to life. You left me wanting more--and that's a winning story. Congrats to you.