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06/12/09
This is brilliant in every way!! Perfect descriptions of man's sin problem... ruling Selfdoms, seething cauldrons, state of anarchy. And the solution is stated beautifully... if we all obeyed one Sovereign Master by new birth. Bravo! Very well done. Linda
06/12/09
Nice work on this poem with it's difficult rhyme scheme. I like many of your thoughts here, "ruling 'selfdoms' like his own" and "a seething cauldron." This is perfect for the empty and full topic!