The Official Writing Challenge
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You summed up the Gospel and our hope in your well chosen words.
06/12/09
I love the format, the message, and the parallels. Very well done.
06/14/09
Very creative. And superbly presented.
06/14/09
Wow, this was really neat! Well done!
Wonderfully creative and powerful message presented. Well done!
Creativity in its finest! Very well done-love the format.
06/16/09
The format alone intrigued me, I've never seen it done like this before. The story, unfolding from beginning to end, was well-written. I enjoyed this prose/poem a lot.
06/17/09
Oh, I so enjoyed reading this as it was and then playing around with different ways of reading it. First, I read the poetry alone, on the left...that was great, standing alone. Then, I read "God's words" along with the response...the sparseness of that was just fantastic!

And that's what's so wonderful about writing something like this; it draws the reader in, inviting him to interact with it. Good job!
06/17/09
oooh, very nicely done! Super creative and with great meaning. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece. I'm glad I didn't miss it. ^_^
Very inventive! I enjoyed the unique quality of this, as well as the beautiful way you shared the gospel.
06/17/09
It IS Good!

Mona
06/18/09
Beautiful, compelling and very creative! Congratulations--well done!
06/18/09
Wow, so unique, and SO good! The format evoked such a strong emotional reaction. Congratulations!!