The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/09
Awww, that was just plain nice! Good writing!
06/12/09
I loved the image of these two playing a checker game and all their reminiscing! Yes, I remember the old "dutch rub." :) I got a bit sentimental when reading this. Nice story!
06/14/09
This drips with compassion and respect - lovely.
06/15/09
I was too caught up in the story to notice anything to critique. I loved this!
06/16/09
This was such a tender story. Enjoyed every bit of it. The dialogue between the brothers was realistic and fun to read. Thanks for sharing such a sad, sweet story.