The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/09
Absolutely, masterful, touching, meaningful and magnificently written! Loved this piece! The "I knew a man, I walked with a man, I loved a man!"...pure Genius!
06/15/09
I really liked this piece. I only noticed a couple of things I want to bring to your attention. First, it is imparitive that you cite where your Bible references are located. I know parenthetical citations are garish, so my suggestion would be to put a note listing them all at the end of your piece. It says in the rule that it won't affect your word-count. Finally, you might want to rework the line that reads: "His talked mysteriously at times," Keep up the good work.