The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
This is a very interesting and complex story. I enjoyed the New Testament story aspect with a modern setting.
06/13/09
I like this modern take on the story. It was intriguing to try to figure out what was going on in the first paragraph. My only critique would be it would be nice with more dialogue, but that's just my opinion. Good story!
06/13/09
I like this modern take on the story. It was intriguing to try to figure out what was going on in the first paragraph. My only critique would be it would be nice with more dialogue, but that's just my opinion. Good story!
06/14/09
This sounds like an awesome VBS program! I love it, and a very well told story as well.