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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Retreat (as in quiet time away) (08/01/05)

TITLE: Under the red apron
By Suzanne R
08/05/05


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The light barely filters through the red apron thrown over my head. It is good to block out the visual distractions around me. I should have unearthed earplugs too.

Around me, chaos reigns. There are piles in each corner of the bedroom, over the coffee table, and the several ‘to do’ piles on the desk have collapsed into one major mess. The bed is unmade, the laundry basket is overflowing, the fridge is empty, the whole place is filthy and I’m expecting dinner guests tonight. My ‘in-box’ contains 149 unread emails, and the phones never stop, be it the fixed line phone, the cell phone or both ringing simultaneously. I’m behind in my daily Bible reading. The pile of dusty books next to the bed bear witness to how pathetic my good intentions are.

Desperate times call for desperate measures.

I almost screamed, “Stop the world, I want to get off!” Instead, I dug out the red apron. Having retreated under the apron, I now sit still, looking somewhat silly.

In our technologically advanced world, we have many time and labour saving devices, a plethora of communication methods, and the ability to travel easily. We have every reason to achieve far more than ever before.

In the ‘good old days’, though, life was simpler.

Take Susannah’s life, for example. Married to a middle class minister, all Susannah had to do was support her husband in his ministry and raise their children. Not for her our crazy lifestyle of beeping palm pilots, phones, computers and more.

On the other hand, Susannah gave birth to nineteen children. That’s a lot to endure over twenty-one years. To watch nine of your babies die would send many insane. To homeschool ten children, including two with physical disabilities, can’t have been easy. Add to this the pressures of supporting her husband in a busy church parish, hosting countless visitors for meals in her home, and offering wise counsel to many women in the parish. Indeed, things were even busier when Susannah’s husband went away, with up to 200 people in her home for weekly meetings to hear her read sermons.

Even without the communication technology of the 21st century, there were many who would certainly be pulling at her dress, calling out to her, knocking at the door, writing letters and generally demanding a little piece of Susannah.

In such an environment, there was literally no place to which Susannah could retreat. Nevertheless, retreat was imperative. At work in the kitchen, peeling potatoes, chopping meat and vegetables or kneading bread, Susannah wore a large apron. Every family member knew that when she finally sat down and pulled the apron over her head, she was not to be disturbed. That was her time to reconnect with her Creator, Sustainer and Empowerer. She made sure it happened daily.

Wise Susannah knew what she needed. And because of that, she flourished. Under her tutelage, one son became a preacher who changed the face of his nation. John Wesley was his name. Through Susannah’s nurture of his creativity, young Charles became one of the most prolific songwriters the church has known. Centuries later, we still sing many of the powerful words penned by Charles Wesley. I wonder if he thought of his mother’s prayer times under the apron in that sometimes turbulent storm of a household when he wrote these words.

“Jesus, Lover of my soul, Let me to Thy bosom fly,
While the nearer waters roll, While the tempest still is high,
Hide me, O my Saviour hide, Till the storm of life is past;
Safe into the haven guide; Oh receive my soul at last!”


In our modern fast-paced world, we would do well to learn from Susannah Wesley.

As I emerge from under the red vinyl apron, life looks altogether different. It’s amazing what a difference spending time with God makes. Life is busy, yes. But oh, life is good.

I fold up the apron, put it away, make a list of the urgent tasks, and get on with my work. As of now, I’ll go back to making a high priority of that empowering daily quiet time. Regular interaction with my Sustainer is too important to neglect. As I busy myself around the home, my perspective correct at last, I hum another of Charles Wesley’s hymns.

“Oh for a thousand tongues to sing my great Redeemer’s praise,
The glories of my God and King, the triumphs of His grace!”



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Anthony Tophoney08/08/05
Amen! My wife and I can really connect with your message here. We just welcomed our newborn son, Devan, to the family and sometimes struggle to keep our time with the Lord. You've communicated the importance of that commitment very well by using Mr. Wesley's family as an example. This article definitely has my wife's vote for the week! We'll be reading this one together often for the next few months. Thank you for the blessing!
Dixie Phillips 08/08/05
I absolutely love the old stories "repackaged" and coming to life for today! They have such depth and meat that sometimes we lack in our new modern society! I just loved your story! REFRESHING!
Cyndie Odya-Weis08/08/05
very nice- I teach "Families in Society" and we reflect often on how families, although different in this century and decade, work well! This is a great example- SUsannah's life expectancy was about 45, I think- and she had to IRON EVERYTHING- what a concept!
Amy Michelle Wiley 08/08/05
A well written, timely reminder. I think I'll go have some quiet time right now. :-)
Beth Muehlhausen08/09/05
Love this simple image: "Every family member knew that when she finally sat down and pulled the apron over her head, she was not to be disturbed. That was her time to reconnect with her Creator, Sustainer and Empowerer. She made sure it happened daily."
Debra Brand08/10/05
Very well written with a great example to back it up.
Joanne Malley08/11/05
Great article! I've been known to lock myself in the closet. Maybe the apron trick will work for me too. :)
Jan Ackerson 08/11/05
A lovely story, using two of my favorite hymns. Thanks!
Shari Armstrong 08/11/05
Wodnerful -I love tying her story to yours -maybe with the same apron strings ;)
Lynda Lee Schab 08/11/05
I wonder how often she sat under that apron. With all those kids and so much responsibility, I would be walking around with it over my head all day long! Great writing, as always. Wonderful entry.
Blessings, Lynda
Karen Ward08/11/05
I have heard this (true) tale about Susannah many times, but I enjoyed your telling of it very much!
Linda Watson Owen08/11/05
You wrapped a vinette of Susanna Wesley's like in an apron of well crafted words, and made that story a treasure indeed! Beautiful!!
Julianne Jones08/12/05
This was a lovely re-telling of a small yet significant story from Susannah Wesley's life. And I liked the way you found your own version - even if the picture of you huddled beneath a red apron makes me smile. Well done. Thank you.
dub W08/12/05
Well done recreation of the Wesley history, although I have heard this story many times, I always enjoy hearing it poised in a new version. Thanks.
Pat Guy 08/12/05
Wow Suz! I loved this! I enjoyed your flow of words and how well it was written. This was great.
Maxx .08/13/05
This was good! Nice flow, nice point, nice application. All around good. A contender in a strong week like this one. I will offer this one critique: You could stand to edit out about 10% of your words. You could still make the same points by being more precise. For example you have:

"My ‘in-box’ contains 149 unread emails, and the phones never stop, be it the fixed line phone, the cell phone or both ringing simultaneously."

You could have made the exact same point by saying:

"I have 149 unread emails and the phones never stop ringing."

or make it an susinct action item:

"When I answer one phone, the other rings. All the while my computer barks 'You've got mail!'"

My 2 cents. Either way, you've got a winner here. Great work!
Crista Darr08/15/05
A wonderful and well written story! "Wise Susannah knew what she needed. And because of that, she flourished." If she could make retreat time with God in the midst of her busy household, we are without excuse. A much needed message!
Debbie OConnor08/15/05
This is great, Suzanne. The best of MANY entries I read about Susannah Wesley this week. Great work. Congrats on your win!
Susan Johnstone05/05/07
Hi Suzanne

I just read your article after doing some research on the net on prayer. Good to see that this came up on a search for "Susannah Wesley prayer apron"!! (I am amazed how the internet files and catalogues items you probably thought were long forgotten.) This is well written and well researched and I love your introduction. It really gave a good hook for the rest of the article. Thanks


   
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