The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/09
I had to smile at your "The purpose of full is empty" philosophy…and I think you're right. :) Then I like how you furthered the concept to talents and spiritual gifts. I smiled at the "box of chocolates" in your conclusion. :)
06/14/09
A lot of perceptive folk wisdom here. I particularly liked the quote from Reagan. I felt however that the story lacked a personal touch - perhaps if you had included an anecdote from your own life rather that inviting the reader to use his imagination, it might have had a bit more punch. Something to mull over. Bless you.