The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/09
Interesting, good writing ... but I have to admit... I just didn't get it.
Interesting but I'd like to have seen some resolution to the mystery.
06/15/09
This definitely held my attention! Great descriptions. I definitely wanted to know what happened at the end. You have a great story-starter there.
I hope you will continue to work on this interesting story and bring its mystery to some resolution. I loved the mother in this piece--blaming her daughter's absentmindedness on the father's side of the family.
06/17/09
I'm going to surf up the coast to your house and get you if you don't resolve this for all of us waiting with baited breath! So far, so GOOD~!!
06/17/09
I guess I'm more like your MC than I care to admit. I understood her perfectly. The only thing I wondered about was that Bob was due home "tomorrow" but it was actually Sunday now. Where was Bob? I think this was a very accurate telling of what a person goes through when you lose gaps of memory... no matter what the health reason.
06/17/09
Oooh! You canNOT end here. LOL! There's too much story. I want it to be a mystery! lolz. No losing her mind for real, but you did great with creating such an intriguing start in so little words! Excellent stuff! ^_^
Mysterious and intriguing....would like to know the resolution. Good stuff!
06/17/09
OK. Is this a dream? I have the same feeling that I get when I get interested in a TV program and then learn it is a 2-parter, knowing I will never remember to see the 2nd part. Is the MC losing her mind...or am I?
Mona
06/17/09
Two words: wonderfully weird.
I like it...