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06/05/09
A nice retelling of a familiar Bible story.
06/07/09
Great descriptions. Ruth is a favorite of mine - and I love this bit of characterization of Naomi, and the foreshadowing.
06/08/09
Thank you for the absorbing color and the depth and range of feelings you've drawn from this story. Well told.
A beautifully imaginative, romantic rendering of a beloved Scripture story. A tiny bit of condensing on the explanatory portions would be the perfect polish on a lovely, lovely piece!


06/10/09
Wonderful retelling of the sweet/bitter account of two women who stuck together through thick and thin (Thick and Thin - have we had that yed? - too late now). Colin
06/10/09
Wonderful contrast of these two women. This is perfect for the topic. I love how your title complements your ending!
06/10/09
ooooh! Nicely done! I liked seeing this new POV from Naomi and Ruth. You had some great, very realistic touches that made them come alive for me. Very well done! ^_^