The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 771 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
06/04/09
Oh, we all need Zelda's in our lives to help us embrace the fun that brightens our days. Loved the voices you gave to Edith and Zelda--I could hear and see them so clearly. Great writing.
06/04/09
You transported me on this trip. I enjoyed all the great descriptions and your take on sweet and bitter, and I LOVE your title!
06/04/09
What a great story that truly captures the spirits of both women. Your insight into your characters is amazing in this piece.
06/07/09
Just SUPER characterization, and what a fun couple of ladies! Fantastic lesson, too. This piece is delightful.
06/07/09
I love this story yet it makes me sad, too. Very good job. You carried me through a gamut of emotions. Well done.
06/08/09
Love Zelda! What a delightful character and her outfit was darling! lol! I loved this read!