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06/05/09
Wow...gripping reality! Such a tough decision faced by your MC. The hymn, toward the end of your entry, is a favorite of mine.
06/07/09
Excellent interior monologue. Absolutely gripping piece, and perfect hymn to go with the story.
06/08/09
Grace and Mercy.... How we all need it, and need to give it. This shows a struggle because of our limited knowledge and understanding. Written so well to do that.
06/08/09
Very thought provoking piece. Some innocents go to jail - some guilty go free- terribe dilemma. Lord save me from ever being on a jury.

Great story. Thanks
Great story and take on topic and also a wonderful reminder of God's grace and mercy to us...which none of us deserve.
06/10/09
That's a beautiful hymn, and I'm glad you used it here. I've often thought it would be an awesome responsibility, to be on a jury in a murder trial. I think there would be some residual guilt, no matter what the decision, and you captured the conflicting emotions very well. Good job!