The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/09
You have so many thoughts in this, running the gamut that life (and God) allows for us. While you listed the heartbreaking things, like cancer and lost baby, I LOVE this stanza, "In the midnight hour, breathless, -- I cast my cares on You -- who maps the mysteries. -- The clock chimes, You whisper". Your ending is filled with "hope" because of what He did. Nice work!