The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/09
beautiful, just beautiful!
06/08/09
You have wonderful alliteration in this, "fearing famine." I like your words here, "salt-caked mirages offering bitter sustenance -- withered, hollow, irrecoverable." Your last stanza left me smiling. Perfect!
06/11/09
Wonderfully crafted poetic message. Congrats.