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I have never tasted coco-quinine, but your stories bring back memories of childhood and quinine. Evocative and well told. Chuckle!
06/08/09
I loved this! You took us there (and brought back memories of my years in Pediatrics!) The kids afe very well portrayed and Dad was wonderful. Thanks for the most enjoyable read.
06/08/09
What a wonderful story. It brought back my childhood memories of cod liver oil. You did a super job on the dialogue.
06/09/09
Oh man...this made me think of one time my mom gave my sister and I cod liver oil when she thought we were faking illness to get out of school...it was terrible! So glad I only had to swallow that stuff ONCE! Well written and very descriptive.
Great descriptions and very well written. Nicely done.