The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
How I admire your tenacity. Shades of Bilhah having children for Rachel, and you have boldly taken it that way. Bravo!
06/11/09
A lovely story of a difficult situation and decision... which will certainly bear good fruit, in time. Congratulations!
06/11/09
You've written this emotion-filled story perfectly! Congratulations on your level placing and Editor's Choice!
06/11/09
You certainly captured the topic with this story of compassion, tenderness, forgiveness and love. Congratulations on your EC win.
06/11/09
Just WOW. You definitely have a gift. Congratulations on your placing in beginners AND your EC. This is just excellent.
06/11/09
Linda you have great comunication skills. I enjoyed you article very much, and look forward to reading more...Vivy

My only suggestion that I remember from college: Don't start sentences with the word "And". I don't know if that is totally a rule or not, but I do remember a professor getting on to me about that.