The Official Writing Challenge
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How I admire your tenacity. Shades of Bilhah having children for Rachel, and you have boldly taken it that way. Bravo!
A lovely story of a difficult situation and decision... which will certainly bear good fruit, in time. Congratulations!
You've written this emotion-filled story perfectly! Congratulations on your level placing and Editor's Choice!
You certainly captured the topic with this story of compassion, tenderness, forgiveness and love. Congratulations on your EC win.
Just WOW. You definitely have a gift. Congratulations on your placing in beginners AND your EC. This is just excellent.
Linda you have great comunication skills. I enjoyed you article very much, and look forward to reading more...Vivy

My only suggestion that I remember from college: Don't start sentences with the word "And". I don't know if that is totally a rule or not, but I do remember a professor getting on to me about that.