The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/09
Love the voice, and especially the paragraph that begins with the paradox. Unique approach to the topic--well done.
06/08/09
Beautiful, sweet... and a little scary, too. Well done.
Thanks for sharing a tender story. I have just joined "the club" with you, in a minor way, I think, and see changes a-coming. Maybe that means I can be in charge of the cooler. I appreciate your outlook.
06/09/09
Oh man. This is so lovely. It brought tears to my eyes, but also a smile. What a circle of life you described here. And that caution...it's worth it! Keep it up and keep smiling at those precious grandkids. That last line brought a huge lump to my throat.
06/09/09
The bittersweet comes through in every line. I can tell it is something you are living, but you shared with the reader and it is a thought-provoker.
Mona
06/10/09
Rich and interesting story - very meaningful. Enjoyed very much. Thank, Colin
06/10/09
I enjoyed your descriptions of the sunblock. Your love for your grandchildren radiates through your writing.