The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
Your excellent choice of words, and the imagery you painted made this story come vividly to life. Truly a fun read.
06/04/09
Oh, super characterization and voice. Loved this piece. Fun.
06/04/09
What a fun adventure...with a humorous ending! Your title is perfect!
I love your writing style...makes for an easy, entertaining read.
06/04/09
Having two sons who have done similar things, I could relate to this one. You captured the tone of two boys up to no good. I really like it.
06/08/09
This is great. I was there in that orchard, and knowing that nothing good was coming, except a hard lesson learned. LOL Thanks for writing.
06/08/09
Delightful! Utterly delightful! Colin
06/09/09
This was a very fun entry - bravo! Made me laugh. I knew Miss Callie would win in the end - just didn't know how. lol.
06/10/09
Hilarious! I couldn't wait to find out what Miss Callie's revenge would be--though I think they might have regretted this the day after, anyway. (Ten or eleven apples all at once... EEK!) Well done!
06/10/09
Home-spun tale told with just the right flavor. Very good.
mona
06/10/09
Excellent voice and atmosphere--love the wit and the story arc. Good one, Dee!