The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this story, the way it is presented. I can feel Lena's walk home, see her enter the hut and find her dying son--the sorrow! But then, when she finds the baby, hope strengthens her for what we know is going to happen to her son.
06/04/09
Very touching. you did a great job in unfolding the details.
06/05/09
I like this a lot. Good writing and on topic very well... We have to look for the sweet in the midst of the bitter sometimes, but it is always there. God sees to it.