The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Lovely descriptions, and you can feel the pleasure and pride of the artist throughout.
05/28/09
As I was reading this, I kept feeling that the true MC was the paint brush, so I saw great meaning from "the brush became an extension." The last line is a kicker. Very nice.
06/01/09
Just beautiful, and an incredible take on the topic and subject matter. Lovely.
06/01/09
You describe the birth of Creation so well in this lovely, poetic piece! Your images are clear and colorful, and my favorite section is this:

"Yellow and white create the essence of light, shattering the night so recently brought into existence. A shimmering sign of hope, the newly presented strokes cast the darkness aside. It is daylight bringing on the dawn."

Nice writing! :)
06/03/09
Love the little hints at Genesis! Gorgeous writing.
Oh how artistic are your words-lovely hon, just lovely!Beautifully described piece.
06/03/09
Simply beautiful! Had to read it slow to enjoy all the different descriptions, so well done!
06/03/09
I like the use of colors that describe so well this beautiful world. This piece also reveals how much delight God took in creation. Beautifully written!
06/03/09
Beautiful and vivid use of colors and imagery! Very well done!
06/03/09
I had to reread your story after seeing Jan's remarks. Sure enough, there is a hint of Genesis. Love it! I could visualize the brush flowing across the canvas as you described the scene. Richly done!
What a beautiful picture you've painted of the Master Painter's picture-does that make sense? Anyway, I love it.
06/03/09
Very colourful - being a amateur artist I enjoyed this well written piece. Thanks so much - Colin