The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
I like your messages in this poem, especially now that my husband, a computer programmer holds a second job as a janitor.
Thanks for sharing/caring!
05/28/09
The janitor is a great character!

I'm having a hard time seeing 'light and dark' here, except figuratively...might be a bit weak on topic.

Love the last few stanzas.
Nice poem and story told. Well done.