The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 750 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
Absolutely awesome.
05/29/09
This is very reminiscent of the poetry of my youth--I enjoyed it very much.
06/02/09
Lovely poem. The imagery was great. Well done.
Really great imagery and a lovely poem.
06/03/09
I loved this: A poem that actually makes sense to me and tells a story. I sometimes wonder the purpose of poetry but this one hit the mark. Good job!
06/03/09
Ahhh, this was a beautiful glimpse into a sweet and timeless story. Lovely poem...
06/03/09
This is so sweet and beautiful. Loved it!
06/03/09
Absolutely wonderful - loved it! Colin
I really like this. Love the sentiment, and the rhyme and meter are wonderful.
Absolutely delightful.
06/03/09
Reads smoothly like an old-fashioned story book, with just the right touch of charm! Loved it! ^_^
This was really smooth, easy reading.
06/03/09
Lots of flavor in this poem. There are poets of years long past who would have been a fan. I'm a fan, too.
Mona