The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
This is really good (Great title too!). I'd suggest some visual way of differentiating between the speakers. Well done.
I love poetry and this story poem was well done! Nice visuals. Good job!
05/29/09
Clever title and a wonderful piece. Especially like the last stanza. Wonderful.
06/02/09
Excellent--and I've got to mention the clever title, with its play on words. I love that sort of thing.