The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
As a word lover, I really enjoyed the middle bits where the narrator is asking about the language of God.

I wish you hadn't ended with a common phrase (slept like a babe in arms)--your writing throughout this piece is so uniquely yours that that one phrase was a bit of a letdown.

This is beautifully written--I felt immersed in it!
06/03/09
Beautiful descriptions! I could picture the scenery. Thank you.