The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice poem...especially liked the last thought about "lighting others' shades". Well done.
05/29/09
Excellent!
05/29/09
Whoops, I hit the submit too soon. I meant to add that I loved so much about this--the structure, the characterization, and especially the message.
06/02/09
I like the voice and message of this poem...how light does indeed influence the darkness. The last two lines were especially articulate.
06/04/09
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR E.C. for this wonderful poem! It has a nice rhythm and flow, and the message is great!

Terrific job! :)