The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Can someone please pass the tarter sauce! This writing is so realistic I can taste the catfish! Nice job and please get this book proposal out there :>
Cute story! Thanks for sharing it.
05/29/09
The last sentence of your first paragraph is a super hook, and I like the contrast between your narrator's old life and her new one.

A few errors in grammar and usage were a bit distracting; send me a PM if you'd like.

Superb title, and I just loved the atmosphere of that simple trailer park.
05/29/09
I like the "hominess" of your MC and friends. Loved the non sequitor (sp?) of some of their remarks. Made me laugh. (Take Jan up on her offer to help, she's a smart one fer sure.)
I loved the new friends of your MC. Your story really shows where the true values of life lie.
05/29/09
I really like this story, and think it is well told. Makes me hungry too!