The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this poem. Very sweet.
05/28/09
I love this simple, sweet poem. It perfectly pictures a truth about receiving just enough light for our present need, and trust in our Father. Sometimes the best light we have is the written promise of our God that He is good and merciful and will never leave us... but that is enough!
05/29/09
Excellent object lesson!

The meter was a little bit trippy in places.

I love the relationship between the father and son in this poem. Very sweet.
06/03/09
This poem ties perfectly to Psalm 119:105. Loved the gentleness that flowed between the father and his son.